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[Saito Bibliotheque]

Try varying the head shapes.

Reabault responds:

I'll vary your head shape >:D

kidding of course, yeah I've already fixed where I was going wrong with the heads/faces :)
thanks

[You cant forget the past]

Only 2 hours. and it shows.

Study Light on Form. You don't seem to understand it all that well.

bocodamondo responds:

"lol i cant believe this i hate my mood change!! i wish i wasnt such a freak"
yeah this a good fact you made there il try to put more time into work and im aware of the light source thing

[School NekoGirl]

Cliche? Yeah

Either learn how clothes make folds, or opt out on them completely. randomly adding lines does not work.

Also. Can she breath with her mouth closed?

bocodamondo responds:

i just love how you allways only looking for the errors in my crappy piece of shits only to complain about them even if they are very small.
atleast when spazkid write a bad review for me he made it so that i just need practice like how a review work. and you sound like that im the worest scum here wich might be true. but oh well
you got the idea. im allready working on cloths shading btw

[Mei-Ling "YUCK!"]

Haha, this is so cute. Her hands need to be a bit bigger, and I think the background should be cell shaded like the character so they coincide but whatev. I still like it. :D

veselekov responds:

Hmm nota bad idea. I could just apply the cutout filter in PS. I'll see which one i think looks best in the animation. .. .. Which IS COMING I SWEAR

[New Pokemon BW2 Trainer]

The way you colored this is really appealing. It's all glossy and reflective.
if I could criticise at all, I'd say that she's prettty character-less. But that's usually what happens with anime styles.

suwako responds:

Thank you for your review and I really do appreciate your kind words.
However I feel the "oh well lol that's usually what happens with ~anime~ styles" remark pretty snobby and unnecessary if I'm going to be perfectly honest. Anime is not all the same and if you think it is you're pretty closed minded. It's just another version of cartoon, they are one and the same.

[Claire Raccoon City]

I like this version, but I have to say I'm more fond of the previous one. The way you drew her eyes is incredibly appealing, and just the whole style in general is to die for.

HassySoda responds:

Yeah I think a lot of people like that one better. I think I went overboard with the detail on the hair for the other version though. Sometimes I do too much detail for overly "simple" looking drawings :C

[Esper Girl]

The problem is in the eyes. There's no character.

bocodamondo responds:

ITS OVER

[Yep]

Haha, I saw the icon for this and thought.
YUP.
That's Twisted.

Your definitely getting better. The eyelashes are nice, but I'd tone the length of them down a bit (maybe a lot) lol
Just imagine how long those would be in reali life. they'd be like claws. OR TALONS! O:

Also, the boobs. They need to be affected by gravity, and for me, I wouldn't make them a double D rack.
Delete the obscure details on the stomach. add more hair to the hair (as in make it hair, not a solid object.

and your shading, (especially around the boobs) needs to be better at creating the 3D feel of it.

When you shade, just make sure to really think about the ins and outs of your drawing. Think about it 3 dimensionally.

Twisted4000 responds:

Woooooahahahha why thank you for the review, and yes the boobs need to be less spherical and perky. :/ You're not the first person to tell me that, actually, lol.

[Takisha]

The knees (if that's what they really are) are incredibly small and disfigured etc.

Her feet are also really misplaced, making it seem as if her legs have become broken which if so, her face does not show enough pain.

The skirt is PRETTY bad. It's flat. and the shading on it is unrealistic.

You also have no background, but to make it even worse you made a solid color with HIGH saturation.

Are you trying to kill everyones eyeballs? Tone that shit DOWN.

Also.

Cliche' anime is Cliche'

bocodamondo responds:

heh i did said it was just a test. and its not really something epic.
i was not giving 100 percent or even 50 into this

oh and here is something peronal to you where im going to be honest and not nice:

(((((((((((((I DONT GIVE A F))) ABOUT WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT ANIMES! CLICHE OR NOT YOU f)))OT! I DO -WHATEVER I WANT TO DO! IF YOU DONT LIKE IT JUST GO JERKING OFF OR WHATVER!
im maybe open for critic and details BUT IM NOT GOING TO CHANGE MY ENTIRE STYLE ONLY BECAUSE OF SOME F===T LIKE YOU SAYS SO STOP SPAMMING ME WITH PMS OR SOMEWHERE ELSE THAT I SHOULD END UP DOING ANIME STYLE! I STARTED SO WHY DO EVEN CLIMB ON ME SO MUCH LIKE A DOUCHBAG! THAT I SHOULD CHANGE IT????! JUST GTFO AND LEAVE ME ALONE
DONT TRY TO CHANGE ME! IT WILL NOT WORK))))))))))))

i hope everything is now cleared.

cheers

[Bonehead and Chihiro]

Wow! Really spectacular man. Really liking all the colors you got on here, and as usual your a boss at city backdrops and perspective.
Only thing I can suggest is maybe to give Chihiro some pants that hug her skin, to show off those girly curves.

CaseyAnimates responds:

Thanks for the response, bro!
I guess I should give Chihiro some skinnier pants. I'm sure nobody would complain if I slammed some sexy into the Bonehead series. c:
You know, as long as the sexy ain't Dawg.