FrostDrive's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rambo]

Somethins' messed

Somethings messed about his face. It'd take too long to identify it all and explain it, so just maybe study facial structure.

Or maybe that's how he actually looks. I don't know what Rambo looks like from imagination, so you might not be wrong.

MEANDNOONEELSE responds:

Yeah, I know it´s a bit messed, but I have gotten much better at drawing. Will post new stuff soon. =)

[Hestia of the Hearth]

I gotta say...

Her upper arm is too long. and the exaggerated lump for her elbow isn't too appealing. The shading on her left foot also makes it seem like the side of her foot is on the ground. Kinda odd.

The colors are nice though, I'm liking that. :D

AnglicanEnvoy responds:

I'm not sure what you mean by her left foot, but the rest I can see what you mean. I had to put the elbow, I was trying to copy proper anatomy, which was undermined by the length of the upper arm XP

Herp derp to me ^^

[Pretty Gal]

Pretty good

Constructive Criticism wise I'd say she needs a smaller neck and some shoulders.

Animarious responds:

Thanks for the critic.
I thin the neck a little and know it looks a little more stylized.

[Rarity-poster]

Amazing~

I love this, because you didn't put the character in anthro form for this pose. MLP fans might even be offended by this which is hilarious.
Anyways, it's a pretty dynamic and interesting pose. May I even say sexy? o_O

nice job! :'D

HOLIMOUNT responds:

lol thats exactly why i did it ....and because she actually is a pretty hot pony

i regret nothing lol

[Girlfriend and I]

The eyes

They are too wide for my tastes. It seems to diminish the look of the characters intellgience. Try putting their eyes closer together.

Shotgunmadmax responds:

I can definitely see that with the girl. I actually kept trying to pin point what the problem was. Thank you for the review, much appreciated.

[Purple Guy Goes Walking]

Purple thing

Be trollin'

If you made this a walk cycle. Itd make a funny "haters gonna hate" thing. xD

Gerkinman responds:

Ha ha, thats true actually.

[Conversation]

Study

Study Anatomy.

DO IT

Gieterrr responds:

Haha, yeah. I'm sorry for my anatomy, I admit it's pretty bad.

[Hail To The King, Baby]

Too clustered

It's all too clustered and disorganized. Try learning concepts of comic page design.

Lintire responds:

s'alright, babycakes, i've already got myself an opinion on where I went wrong.

[Eye]

Chillingly creepy!

What a great concept! I"m lovin' it. :'D

MEANDNOONEELSE responds:

Thank you =D!

Btw, it wasn´t me who rated your comment as useless =(

[Girl portrait]

Pretty good dude!

Glad to see you improved! Tremendously I"d say! :D

I can't think of any criticism, besides maybe for her eyelashes don't use pure black, but instead a dark grey color.

MEANDNOONEELSE responds:

Thank you! =)